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Yesterday，our school has a parents' meeting，which was interested and unforgettable to everyone.
It was 9 o'clock when the meeting began.At first，our head-teacher made introduction and suggested that we students should have a good attitude in study.Then another read a few letter to students written by parents.They were very moving for us that we couldn't hold up our tears.At last，there was a warm and face-to-face conversation between us or our parents.
All in all，we all felt happily and sure that we would make great progress.We like the teachers a lot of，especially our English teacher，Mr Yang.His classes are lively，even the students who don't do well in English take part in his classes now.We like her very much，our English teacher.
We like our class，teachers and are looking forward to making greater progress.
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