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When it comes to music，here is what I think：Music is one of the important part in my life.The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress，but brought me pleasure.Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats，but they still can make me feel calm and comfort.I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions.While prepared for the coming day，I love listening to music as my regular morning routine.Also，I am planning to learn to play piano.My life with songs and harmonies would be complete empty.

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