假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：（1）每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞。
（2）只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。
Our school is holding an activity to help a school in the poor area， which not only help the students there enrich their lives but also enables us to feel the joy of sharing and appreciate it what we have by helping others.
Here is that we can do. First， we can donate our using books， clothes， basketballs， electronic products and so on to them. Second， we can write letters to them regular to share opinions and make friend with them. In addition， invite them to our homes to spend holidays is a good way， where may give them some unforgettable experiences.
You are all welcome to join in the activity do what you can to make the better world for us all!
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