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Lang Ping
As a player，Lang Ping brought honor and glory to his country.As coach，she led the China women's volleyball team to medals at world championships and the Olympics.As a person，she is loving by fans at home and abroad.When the Chinese team was preparing for the 2015 World Cup，her determination was tested.The team that Lang Ping had built were falling apart.One of the best player had been injured，and the team captain had to leave because of heart problems.Lose two important players was a big challenge，but Lang Ping did not lose her heart.She had faced difficulties after，and she knew that her young players could win if they worked together as a team.Two weeks late，they were world champions!Then in 2016，Lang Ping leads her volleyball team to Olympic gold in Brazil.
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