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I travelled to Baiyun Mountain last summer.I went hiking with a couple friends.It was a good trip at the beginning and something unexpected happen on the way.While we were climbing a long flight of stair，one of my friends suddenly felt a terribly pain in his stomach.Luckily we brought a tent with us.We had put up the tent，that he had a good rest.He took some medicine with some water and lying down for a rest.After the while，he felt better and we walked on.We all enjoyed us at the top of the mountain.
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