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I have had the pleasure of meeting a nice neighbor since my family move to the new community. We usual just wave and say "hi" when we meet. Therefore， an incident changed this. The other day， a heavier rain hit our area. With strong winds blowing throughout the day， a part of his wooden fence， about 6 foot of it， came down. When I was wondering what to get it repaired， he gave me a hand. With his help， the fence was fixed quickly. It was kind act by my neighbor and I was touching by his kindness. I will soon send to him a thank-you note.

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